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Friday, 8 November 2013

My Story Review By Fusi

Story Review

WALT: We are learning to review stories we read.

Giving it a Shot By David Tulloch

This story is about a girl named Lauren. Lauren took part in  Shot Put for her school in an athletics competition. She beat all her other friends and the older students at her school. Lauren was the best at shot put at her school. She came first at  her school competition. At the inter - school competition she came third and her dad was upset because her dad felt that she should have come first.

This story took place at home and  at Lauren’s the school. The characters in this story are Dad, Nina, Lauren and the students.

I like this story because it is interesting and Shot Put is one of my favourite sports.

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