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WALT review stories we read

Mahina - a - rangi by Rawiri Piripi

This story is about Turongo falling in love with Mahina - a - rangi. Turongo fell in love with Mahina - a - rangi because of her good looks, her self-confidence and witty conversations. It was also the Kawakawa fragrance that helped to attract Turongo towards Mahina - a - rangi.

The characters in this story are Turongo and Mahina - a - rangi. This story takes place at Kahungunu a forest.

I like this story because it is a very interesting love stoy.

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Beetle by Philippa Werry

This story is about a family going tramping in the bush. The children were so bored because it was raining, so Sam went out to get some firewood from the bushes. When Sam got some fire wood, he found a Huhu Beetle on a log. He showed the Huhu Beetle to his Dad. Then Dad said ”Let's play a game called Beetle.” Dad wanted to play the game with the children to keep them busy. They carried on playing their game.

The characters in this story are Dad, Sam, Phoebe and Matt. This story took place outside in the bushes.

I like this story because it tells us a little bit about Beetles and it is interesting too.