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Friday Night Out by Kathy Taylor

This story is about a group of children going to watch a game of rugby between Auckland and Wellington at the Cake Tin Stadium.

When Campbell went to get some hot dogs and some chips he was in the line forever. When he came back with his hot dogs and chips he spotted Jason and Max leaning against the wall talking to these two girls.

The characters in this story are Mum, Max, Two girls, Jason, Campbell and Tana.

I like this story because it is so interesting and it is a story that I understand well to answers question based on the text.

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Giving it a Shot By David Tulloch

This story is about a girl named Lauren. Lauren took part in  Shot Put for her school in an athletics competition. She beat all her other friends and the older students at her school. Lauren was the best at shot put at her school. She came first at  her school competition. At the inter - school competition she came third and her dad was upset because her dad felt that she should have come first.

This story took place at home and  at Lauren’s the school. The characters in this story are Dad, Nina, Lauren and the students.

I like this story because it is interesting and Shot Put is one of my favourite sports.

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Memories by Anna Kenna

This story is about Sophia and mum looking at their memories when mum was able to walk and dad was there and Marcello the pony was there too.

Sophia was frustrated when her mum asked her to do some chores at home because her mum could not do things for her because she was in a wheelchair.

Sophia was mad at her mum but at the end of the story Sophia said sorry to her mum for being rude and disrespectful.

The story took place in Sophia’s house. The characters in this story are Sophia and Mum.

I like this story because it is interesting and a bit sad because the mum is in the wheelchair and she could not walk.

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A Passion for Ponies

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A Passion For Ponies by Donna Cherry

This article is about two girls named Chelsea and Sarah who had a pony each. They always went to the paddock after school to look after  their ponies. The two girls spent a lot of time grooming their ponies because they didn't want their ponies to get hurt and dirty. The two girls were happy to play with their ponies. Chelsea’s pony was nineteen years old and was named Teddy.

I liked this article because it tells me how I can look after ponies.

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Mahina - a - rangi by Rawiri Piripi

This story is about Turongo falling in love with Mahina - a - rangi. Turongo fell in love with Mahina - a - rangi because of her good looks, her self-confidence and witty conversations. It was also the Kawakawa fragrance that helped to attract Turongo towards Mahina - a - rangi.

The characters in this story are Turongo and Mahina - a - rangi. This story takes place at Kahungunu a forest.

I like this story because it is a very interesting love stoy.

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Beetle by Philippa Werry

This story is about a family going tramping in the bush. The children were so bored because it was raining, so Sam went out to get some firewood from the bushes. When Sam got some fire wood, he found a Huhu Beetle on a log. He showed the Huhu Beetle to his Dad. Then Dad said ”Let's play a game called Beetle.” Dad wanted to play the game with the children to keep them busy. They carried on playing their game.

The characters in this story are Dad, Sam, Phoebe and Matt. This story took place outside in the bushes.

I like this story because it tells us a little bit about Beetles and it is interesting too.